Posted: November 6, 2013 by BA Dillon in BOYS are just BETTER in BOOKS (Romance and Indie Authors), Uncategorized



This is the story of Ember and Trace. Ember moves to New York to become a writer. She works as a waitress in a very high end restaurant, and also gets some work as a journalist. Ember meets Trace – a hot, tattooed fighter, when he saves her from some creepy guy. They have an attraction. She follows him around – that’s weird. He’s always around – ready to save her day, also weird. I’ve written this many times – I’m a fan of supporting characters. I believe they are the foundation of the principal parts. So here’s my problem with this story – the supporting characters. With the exception of Ember’s dad and uncle, the rest were just mediocre. This is one of those books I really wanted to like. And I did to a point. I thought the storyline was new and refreshing. The twist at the end was unique. The author did a really cool job interlinking both characters’ pasts – and that was the best part of the book. The dialogue is OK – but I need a true dialogue drive story to be satisfied with any book! Without great conversations – a book is just “OK.” I’m giving three hearts since I got my HEA, and I may just read this one again one day and revisit this review!

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