Posted: October 22, 2013 by BA Dillon in BOYS are just BETTER in BOOKS (Romance and Indie Authors)

callie and kayden2BROKE MY HEART!


I hate starting a review like this one is going to start ……I waited for this one. I waited for this one a long time. AND it’s ONE BIG disappointment. I gave a lower rating to The Coincidence of Callie and Kayden because of the ending. This time – sorry Ms. Sorenson – the ending completely blew the rest of the story to bits. There was absolutely no closure to their story. Not having your principal characters together at the end of the book was just BAD!!! Kayden and Callie’s secrets are finally out, and they help each other find “redemption.” Not enough dialogue, never understood where the story was going, and was more interested in Seth and Luke than the principal characters. And where’s the research – really there’s a statute of limitations on RAPE of a twelve year old??? Ms. Sorenson is a gifted storyteller. She writes a beautiful build up to Callie and Kayden’s love story, but it falls completely flat when he says I love you for the first time over the phone. Bummer….

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